Here you will find a number of business school admissions essays that we have collected over the years. We've changed some key details to protect each applicant’s identity, but beyond that, what you see here are the applicants’ own words.

While we have included some brief comments, these comments do not nearly reflect the level of evaluation you will receive when you submit your work to MBA Game Plan for comprehensive MBA essay advice. The feedback that we provide is far more comprehensive than what you see here. Return to the previous page to view actual examples of our business school essay evaluations.

Remember that any business school essay that you write needs to contain your own ideas, and be in your own words. We hope that you can use the ideas contained here to help you refine your own MBA application essays. Good luck!